Magical-Zorse's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Score 3.00+ in < 1 hour!!]

wow

That is so true. I never thought about it that way. Thanks for pointing it out.
*best tutorial ever*

TOMIS responds:

Thanks you.

[The Last Hour: Chapter 5]

The Last Hour: Chapter 5

I guess I have to hand it to you. Episode five is better than the rest.
But still isn't very good.
You haven't worked on getting more frame by frame work in there, its still just tweens. Nothing looks normal.
The sound quality was better than the rest, but It was stll hard to understand what they were saying.
As for the storyline, I had absolutely no idea what was going on. Was he talking to the tv? And what was he saying? You'll need to work on that some more.
--Overall--
Its something I would expect from someone who only has about 2 months, of flash experience, give or take some time. You could make the entire series better, if you made it more interesting to watch. One thing when making a flash is asking yourself: How will this make someone feel? And what will people think? Will they find it humorous, or will they feel it was a serious flash backed up by good animation?
Think about that when making your next episode.

Jaiba responds:

actually I only have 1 week of flash animation experience. i only got flash a week ago, and started playing around with flash. so i'd say i'm doing pretty good with only 1 week of practice and playing around.

[The Last Hour: Chapter 4]

The Last Hour: Chapter 4

You need to work a bit on the storyline, it takes place in the future, and theres an anti christ that sides with the evil people. Thats just kind of weird.
Secondly, you need to get better quality sound, I could hear you breathing into the mic, and it was a scratchy.
Lastly, you need more movement in it. the only thing that moved in that entire thing was the people's mouths. You need more frame by frame and less tweens.

Jaiba responds:

more will be explained in chapter 5. chapter 5 will be awsome. no boring stuff we get right to the point and we will deliver. promise me you will watch chapter 5 and not let your negative views of these chapters go against the greatness that is chapter 5 when it comes out.

-jaiba

[chainSAW: Melon Trap]

Saw: Melon Trap

Dude!
That was awesome!
I never knew seedless melons could be so dangerous.........

cyotecody555 responds:

me niether lol

[Apples.]

Apples.

Nice animation style, and I loved the use of irony in it when he attacked him for the apple when there were plenty more on the ground.

SWiTCH responds:

thanks!

[HappySong...]

HappySong...

lol......just, lol

maddskill responds:

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